We are both looking for Jasmine
- Advika Maheshwary
- Jul 17
- 3 min read
The tides of Mumbai whisper through the pillars of the sky,
Where the salt of rising oceans meets a world too busy to cry.
The monsoon isn't water here, but a mist of oil and light,
that blurs the jagged edges of the towers in the night.
The city is a mirror, polished, cold, and new,
Where the windows swallow sunlight and shadows don’t get through.
There is no room for sorrow, in this thrumming, off-key hive,
Where the pulse is just a circuit, not the hum of being alive.
I sought for the silence where the urban currents end,
looking for a Bombay that time forgot to mend.
I found him near the outskirts, where the bronze began to rust,
A lonely, copper worker tracing patterns in the dust.
A rusted sub-unit 1, built for welding stainless steel,
Now scraping out the sediment of old, forgotten dreams.
He moved with heavy lungs, like a diver in the deep,
Guarding something sacred that the city couldn't keep.
He was broken, he was dented, he was ancient and alone,
Crouched beside the grey ruins of a bench of weeping stone.
With a finger made of steel, and a joint of clicking gear,
He was carving out a message that the world would never hear.
He didn’t have a signal, and he didn’t have a task,
He was more than just the wires, more than just the metal mask.
He traced the name while trembling, in a slow and rhythmic line,
A petal carved in the cold, hard steel to honor Jasmine.
He leaned his chassis forward just to shield the fading mark,
A curved and hollow posture, like a soldier in the dark.
He didn’t touch the letters, but he hovered just above,
As if his motor control pulsed with all the warmth of human love.
And when the wind swept over with a sharp and sudden breath,
He shielded every letter from that little, dusty death.
He was forged in a factory, I was born of breath and bone,
two different kinds of wreckage, weary, wasted, and alone.
My blood was hot and heavy, and his oil was cold and dry,
but we both were looking back up at a monotonic sky.
I reached within my pocket for a scrap of folded grey,
A letter written by a hand the years had swept away.
I’d kept it through the decades, though the ink was thin and frayed,
The only piece of "yesterday" that hadn't been replaced.
I smoothed the brittle paper where the signature was seen,
The same loops of the letters that spelled out the name Jasmine.
She was the one who built him, with a heart of copper wire,
To be her quiet witness when the world began to tire.
She was my only sister, lost before the tides rose,
The guard of this memory that the metal worker knows.
He had a dented chest plate, I had scars across my palm,
Yet both seeking out a memory to keep the spirit calm.
I was a fading heartbeat in a city made of glare,
The only thing still fragile in this neon-smothered air.
He didn't turn to greet me, but he shifted on the grit,
A small, metallic motion, giving room for me to sit.
He moved as if he sensed the heavy anchors in my chest,
Like two heartbeats in the silence finding one shared place to rest.
I realized then the secret that the city couldn't find:
That a heart is just a vessel for the things we leave behind.
His gears began to stutter as he reached the final curve,
And I felt my own breath falter with a sudden, aching nerve.
We were two sides of a fabric that a single hand had torn.
We were bound by something older than the code or than the bone.
The hand of time had reached us, a cold and greedy grip,
that lets the finest metal rust and strongest memories slip.
The clock has tore the gears away and turned my hair to white,
Both left as tattered remnants in the dying of the light.
He loses every steady bolt while I lose every name,
Two different shapes of ruin, burning out the same.
Around us, they were flying, in their sleek and silent cars,
Building heavens out of neon that could take out all the stars.
But they’ve lost the art of staying, they have lost the feeling of grief,
While we found a stolen sunlight in a name and in a leaf.
He tapped the stone in rhythm, one, two, three, and then a four,
And I felt Lennon’s "Imagine,” a song we used to adore.
For as long as someone lingers, for as long as someone cares,
The world remains a treasure, in the memories we repair.
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